Could I never forgot

Could I never forgot

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AirinHuffle

Posted on 15/6/2008, 10:35

Chikorita

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Categoria: Originale, Poesia
Titolo: Could I never forgot
Genere: Triste, Introspettivo
Personaggi: ----
Rating: Verde
Avvertimenti: One Shot

Non so se questo coso va messo anche per lo poesie, be' io lo metto!

Comunque è una poesia scritta il 29 settembre...
L'ho ritrovata e mi piaceva molto, quindi l'ho postata

. Sul mew page non la misi a suo tempo perché mi sembrava di fare la "piagnona", ma ora a rileggerla è bella!

Could I never forget

Could I never forget those days
when I lived in your green eyes
Every part of you was just mine
from the nails to your lips’ line

How can’t you see all idle tears
suppressed in her life’s darkness
choked in the smoke of the seas
glimpsed by her sad uselessness

I see her fears in all her vain lies
stop suffering, silent your pain
look the night and how it’s fine

Storms are blowing on our hearts
I really hope they stop wickedness
they’ll find peace in some earths

Edited by Airin89 - 16/6/2008, 12:54

DavisPotter

Posted on 15/6/2008, 10:39

Quilava

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Location: Arenipoli

Status: Offline: ultima azione eseguita il 10/12/2009, 21:55

Bella!!!*___* Bravissima!

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~Bad Girl~
When the red light comes on I transform (x2)

[Aubrey]
Look in my eyes covered in Maybelline
Looking like something fresh out a magazine
I can be part of your deepest fantasies
You're the detective, come solve my mystery

[D. Woods]
Some say that love is all that I'm missing
Some call it jezebel, I call it attention
But what they don't know they can't even imagine
Say I don't have no self-esteem but it's my fashion

[Chorus]Maybe I'm just a bad girl
Maybe I'm just a bad girl, a bad girl
I can be your addiction if you wanna get hooked on me
I-I can be your addiction if you wanna get hooked on me
Maybe I'm just a bad girl
Maybe I'm just a bad girl, a bad girl
When the red light comes on I transform[/Chorus]

[Dawn]
Something about me has got you hypnotized
Examine my body like you're the science guy
Watching my every move you anticipate
What ya thinking about, boy I can recreate

[Aundrea]
Some say that love is all that I'm missing
Some call it jezebel, I call it attention
But what they don't know they can't even imagine
Say I don't have no self-esteem but it's my fashion

[Chorus]

[Missy Elliott]
I know you hear me boy...
B-A-D-C-H-I-C, lookin' so sexy
Make them bitches hate me
She not me cause there's just one me
I'm the M to the I-double S-Y-E
Lights come on, I tr-transform
Gimme that dick, baby, com-come on
I can do it all night 'til the break of dawn
On-On and on, I keep on goin'
They call me a jezebel cause I freaks, I does it well
Got extensions in my hair, bad girls is ya'll up in here? (Yeah)
Tonight we just gonna let it do what it do
I can put this pretty young thing on you
I ain't lookin' for attention, I just want you
Let me be your addiction, I can be that too

I can be your addiction if you wanna get hooked on me
I-I can be your addiction if you wanna get hooked on me

[Chorus]

[Shannon]
From a caterpillar to a butterfly
I know I got something that you're gonna like
(Don't be afraid I won't let you down)
I'm the one that'll make you come around

[Chorus]

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AirinHuffle

Posted on 15/6/2008, 10:48

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Status: Offline: ultima azione eseguita il 7/9/2009, 22:20

Grazie! Ma quello, categoria, titolo ecc, ma va messo anche per le poesie? E va bene come l'ho messo?

DavisPotter

Posted on 15/6/2008, 10:56

Quilava

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Posts: 2455
Location: Arenipoli

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aspetta te lo modifico un attimo, poi vedi come ho modificato e come quindi sarebbe meglio mettere...^^

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elendil101

Posted on 15/6/2008, 11:12

Group: Admin
Posts: 1309
Location: un mondo splendente ancor più del sole...

Status: Offline: ultima azione eseguita il 8/12/2009, 20:00

ire bella! e devo dire che ho capito quasi tutto, tranne un paio di paroline!!! XD lol

AirinHuffle

Posted on 15/6/2008, 11:20

Chikorita

Group: Utenti
Posts: 275

Status: Offline: ultima azione eseguita il 7/9/2009, 22:20

Eheheheh se hai bisogno per la traduzione chiedi pure!

elendil101

Posted on 15/6/2008, 11:52

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Posts: 1309
Location: un mondo splendente ancor più del sole...

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allora... cosa vuol dire nails ?
idle ?
suppressed ?
choked ?
glimpsed ?
wickedness ?

AirinHuffle

Posted on 15/6/2008, 14:19

Chikorita

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nails= unghie
idle= inutili, inattive
suppressed= represse
choked= soffocate
glimpsed= intraviste
wickedness= cattiveria

elendil101

Posted on 15/6/2008, 16:22

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mmm ok!!!

Eire Snape

Posted on 16/6/2008, 11:45

Luxray

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Ire!! che bella!! mi piace molto!
Solo che c'è un errore nel titolo... Forgot è passato!

eheh ire, non si fanno queste cose!

P.S. scrivi IN RIMA???!! Vergogna! (ricordi?

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slid into the ditch I have this overwhelming loss of ambition we said lets name thirty good reasons why
we shouldn't be together I started by saying things like "you smoke" "you live in new jersey (too far)"
you started saying things like "you belong to the world" all of which could have been easily
refuted but the conversation was hypothetical I am totally short of breath for you why can't you shut
you're stuff off....i'm in the front row, the front row with popcorn I get to see you see you close up
(Alanis Morissette - Front Row)

pronaque cum spectent animalia cetera terram,
os homini sublime dedit caelumque videre
iussit et erectos ad sidera tollere vultus.